Christian Fiction: Laundry

The sky was beautifully blue, and the sun smiled brightly on the trees whose green leaves, hanging loosely from their branches, danced slowly to the rhythm of the wind. 

‎Now a routine, my bucket sat in hands as I embarked on a trip to the tank for a water fill. On my trip, my sleepy eyes failed not to fall for her - old yet agile, each wrinkle on her brown skin had a story to tell.

‎By her side, sat a mountain of his dirty clothes - sorted into whites, blacks, blues, reds, duvets and pillowcases, curtains, then rags - arranged in parallel like heaps on my neighbour's farm.

‎Her back bent, forward, at a degree of 90. Her hands disappeared into a large bowl of water lathered with her favourite detergent. With each back-and-forth scrub of the shirt of one young enough to wash hers, she took a free trip to a decade ago when her cheeks received the morning pecks of her husband, when her hands cooked for home, her heart bore the requests of their kids, her smile gave a warm entrance to her clients, and her hands were lifted in holiness to Him. 

‎Everything was perfect like a cup of hot coffee on a rainy morning until her husband's heart which had held her smile all morning and evening was pierced, at night, by a bullet meant for the head of a repentant cultist. 

‎Then, her perfect wall fell, louder, and with a mightier thud than Jericho's.

‎Her return to reality came with a sound, not strange - the vibration of her black NOKIA phone. It was a call that made her breath stop, her heart race, and her palms grow sweaty. Iya Amina - her neighbour and benefactor whom she promised to refund before the sun was buried - barked into her ears to remind her of her debts.

‎So, she resumed scrubbing - gently, carefully - the collars, necklines, hems, waist bands, pocket openings; yet faster now, for the next laundry and its pay, and the next, and the next.


‎Outside, the leaves still danced, but her rhythm was not theirs.

‎As my eyes linger on her, my heart whispers to Heaven's ears: may her heart receive the Great Physician's compassionate healing hands; may her soul be scrubbed gently and carefully towards salvation; and may her spirit be liberated again.


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