This Great News
Soul, I know you’re an haven for forbidden passions:
You’re drunk with wine of lust laced with venom.
I know, like Bunyan’s pilgrim, you are
Burdened with the world & it's fading pleasures;
Sweet but flames in the gut – that is to say, death.
You wander, burdened back bent, seeking
Oasis in living hell.
Misery shawls you like a corpse –
You’re a breathing corpse.
Another trophy to be on the devil’s shelf.
Another wonder to be swallowed by earth,
Accompanied with tearful requiems and RIPs when
You’re not at peace in the flames!
Another figure to swell the towering
Figures screaming prayers when it’s late.
Soul, before you exit that body, hear this:
Come to me and you’ll have your rest.
Take my yoke as it is light.
Drink yourself drunk from this spirit well and
Thirst never will scorch your soul, making
It desolate like the ruins of a forgotten city.
Now rise, soul.
You’ve tasted of my wonders.
Be my voice to the world.
Tell them of a foolishness wiser than their
Wisdom & of grace & atonement.
Herald this great news unashamed.
Never let shame clamp your tongue
Tell them of a water flowing from
Christ to any who desires a drink.
Korede Teriba is a creative and content writer whose works has appeared in literary anthologies which include the Star and Staff magazine, Vanguard Issue, National Student Anthology of the Faculty of Law Literary & Debating Society, University of Ibadan. He’s an undergraduate of the University of Ibadan. In addition to writing, Korede is a Campus journalist.
Awesome, awesome, Korede. Faith burgeoned on the skin of earthen vessel on reading this.
ReplyDeleteScribbled with dexterity...Nice one korede
ReplyDeleteGreat..welldone korede
ReplyDeleteNice Work Korede. Superb
ReplyDeleteThis is superbly and awesomely scripted.
ReplyDeleteAmazing!!
ReplyDeleteWe are not to be ashamed of Jesus Christ, no matter the pressure. Hmmm. Great piece, Kore Terry.
ReplyDeleteHmmmm...a work of depth
ReplyDeleteI love your diction. This is a great piece.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteAmazing Sir. Weldone
ReplyDeleteThis is really beautiful. Well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job sir. 🙏🙏
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece.
ReplyDeleteWow Bravo to you
ReplyDeleteI love this poem
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ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely poem
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written
ReplyDeleteA last hope for a dying soul. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteAs always, Korede always exemplify Christ's work in us through his piece.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing
ReplyDeleteAn insightful piece
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Chief. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
ReplyDeleteMy fav line rise up and tell them the foolishness wiser than their wisdom
ReplyDeleteMan U are great 😍
Glory!!! The best news ever told to man!
ReplyDeleteImagery and metaphor are consciously used! 👊
ReplyDeleteBro. Korede, you're going places. This poem speaks to me. It has a heart.
ReplyDeleteNice one, well written
ReplyDeleteAmazing!! Good work man!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing 🥺✨
ReplyDeleteNice work, Korede
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful work of art.
ReplyDeleteThis is really great
ReplyDeleteInsightful piece lazed with dexterity!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece. Well done
ReplyDeleteGood work friend
ReplyDeleteInspirational piece
ReplyDeleteGood work
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful korede
ReplyDeleteKorede, this is great. The lines speak to my heart
ReplyDeleteI read this poem over and over again and I can say is, Korede, well done. The Lord is with you. We're ashamed of the Gospel. Shame can't clamp our tongues.
ReplyDeleteTo write a gospel poem is not a joke YOu are such a great writer Sir,well-done Sir,may the lord strengths you
ReplyDeleteThrilling! Thumbs up!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful work
ReplyDeleteGreat work
ReplyDeleteThis magnificent.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful
ReplyDeleteWell done Korede
ReplyDeleteWell written 👏
ReplyDeleteMhen, the beauty in this🤲🏾
ReplyDeleteWell written
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece Korede. Well done
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteWow!
Wow!
This is wonderful piece penned on the Christian faith. God bless you sir.
God bless you Mr Korede
ReplyDeleteBalogun of poetry, well done.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful piece Korede
ReplyDeleteGreat quilling by you Mr Korede
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines! It was like music for my mind
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Absolutely masterful!
ReplyDeleteMiriam Johnson
ReplyDeleteGreat work
ReplyDeleteDeep, probing, pointed and absolutely great work
ReplyDeleteThis is just a wonderful art on Christ
ReplyDeleteJesu ni ona. Christ saved us. Great work Korede
ReplyDeleteYes
ReplyDeleteWe shall rise and tell people of Christ
Man was mired in sin. Now he's saved. He must go out t preach Christ alone - Solus Christus
ReplyDeleteHe was pierced for our transgressions
ReplyDeleteWell scribbled sir
ReplyDeleteGood poem brother
ReplyDeleteWe rise, rise, rise and rise in Christ
ReplyDeleteScribbled in faith
ReplyDeleteThis is a brilliant piece
ReplyDeleteA nice piece korex ✅
ReplyDeleteAnother great piece
ReplyDeleteJust, wow!
ReplyDeleteThis is simply creative
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