The Change that happens when the Spirit comes by Adenuga Sarah Oluwafeyisayo

Adenuga Sarah Oluwafeyisayo

The New Man Writing Contest

Theme: Partakers of His Grace (2 Peter 1:4; John 14:20)

Poem Title: The Change that happens when the Spirit comes



The Change that happens when the spirit comes
 
Intro
 It starts like a whisper…
 A breeze stirring dry ground,
 A flicker where darkness had settled down.
 Not just a moment, not just a spark,
 But a fire igniting deep in the heart.
Verse 1
 See, when the Spirit comes, everything shifts,
 The weight of the past starts to lift.
 Fear that held tight loses its grip,
 Chains that once bound suddenly slip.
Eyes once closed now blaze with sight,
 A soul once lost now walks in light.
 No longer broken, no longer the same,
 A heart reborn in Jesus’ name.
Chorus
 Oh, the change when the Spirit moves,
 When heaven’s power breaks through the   roof!
 No longer striving, no more shame,
 Only grace—only His name.


Verse 2

I in Him, He in me,
 A mystery wrapped in eternity.
 Not just near but deep inside,
 The very breath that turns the tide.
An inheritance that won’t decay,
 Not bought by works, not swept away.
 Unshakable, held in grace,
 A promise secured beyond time and space.
Bridge
 So when He moves, let walls collapse,
 Let doubt give way, let faith unwrap.
 No more fear, no more delay,
 When the Spirit comes, the night turns day.
Outro
 So I stand, no longer alone,
 The Spirit in me, heaven’s throne.
 A change so deep, a love so wide,
 When He moves—I'm alive inside!



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  1. The Spirit indeed changes a man.

    Great write-up Sarah

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  2. Beautiful write-up, Sarah.

    When the Spirit comes, everything changes!

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  3. Awesome. Splendid. This is a master piece. Keep it up Feyisayo.

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  4. I in Him, He in me,
    A mystery wrapped in eternity.

    Nice one Sarah!

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  5. I love her write up especially in verse 2

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  6. Superb Sarah.

    When the Spirit comes indeed everything changes. Keep up the good work.

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  7. "See, when the Spirit comes, everything shifts,
    The weight of the past starts to lift."

    This Is really nice, Great Job Sarah

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  8. It's truly amazing, the truth you've been able to capture in these words, from the intro it already pulls me in.

    I already have a favourite line "Not just a moment, not just a spark,
    But a fire igniting deep in the heart."

    This is an amazing Piece Sarah, well done

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  9. Waoh! Amazing piece, my dear! Burdens are indeed lifted when the spirit comes. The presence of the spirit is the starting point for change and transformation!
    Go Feyi💪! The spirit has truly come on you❤️

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  10. When he moves, I'm alive inside.. you just created a masterpiece 😭😭😭🥺

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  11. This is really beautiful
    Every line intentionally crafted to show how much we change when God's spirit is in us

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  12. Fantastic sarah
    When he moves I am alive inside

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  13. Really amazing
    Keep it up dear

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  14. "Eyes once closed now blaze with sight"
    Reminds me of the scripture .... the eyes of your understanding be enlightened.
    Good job Sarah 👏

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  15. Awesome Sarah

    This is very good 👍 Keep it up

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  16. OLADIPUPO ALFRED OLUWABUNMI14 March 2025 at 15:54

    When Spirit comes you become unstoppable. Your choice of words are awesome. Well done dear

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  17. Nothing meaningful can be achieved until the Spirit comes.

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    1. Great.. as a music expert, you have my YES

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  18. Keep it up
    We're proud of you

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  19. Good job you dear, The Lord is your Strength By His Grace.

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  20. Very nice
    Keep it up

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  21. Welldone Sarah. Good write up. You're blessed.

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  22. "Only grace - only His name" - a summary of God gifting us His Spirit that leads to our renewal.
    Inspiring work, Sarah. Keep it up

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  23. Modupe Fadayomi14 March 2025 at 22:40

    Great work
    Keep it up

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  24. Hmmmm
    Great Write up

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  25. A beautiful masterpiece!🔥
    Great job Sarah.

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  26. Uanseoje Oluwakemi Franca15 March 2025 at 06:47

    Yes, it is An inheritance that won’t decay,
     Not bought by works, not swept away.
     Unshakable, held in grace.
    A beautiful write up Sarah.

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  27. Nice 👍, very interesting 👌🤯😎.

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  28. Good job Sarah. Beautiful write up

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  29. This is very sound.
    Well done, Sarah.

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  30. This is an interesting read

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  31. And the Spirit shall rest upon you propelling you to higher heights

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  32. Not bought by works, not swept away. This was a really good read, well done!

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  33. very good write up Sarah. keep it up!

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  34. Quite impressive! Well done!👏🏾 👏🏾

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  35. The spirit brings about lifting weight and causing every chains to loose, we are proud of the grace that brought us into new spirit... So inspiring Sarah 👍👍

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  36. Go,Feyi! It's a job well done.

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  37. Of a truth, the Spirit cause the different in the life of man and on earth as Jesus said the comforter will come as he ascend. It is evident up till today. Weldone Sarah, you have expressed your experience with the Spirit.

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  38. The Spirit of God is a great gift to the believer.

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  39. I in him, Him in me
    Indeed a mystery!
    Keep it up!

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  40. The Spirit is indeed a game changer

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  41. This is a great piece and it's so inspiring
    Indeed I am alive when the spirit comes
    Thank you so much
    Please keep it up

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  42. Nice one Sarah, when the Spirit comes it's like a fire igniting the heart.

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  43. Awesome! God will continue to increase your wisdom in Jesus name

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  44. Well thought out piece. Well done!

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  45. When the Spirit comes, a new man is born. Well done Sarah. More Grace.

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  46. This is fantastic. Absolute truth. The lord is your strength

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  47. The spirit of God makes a difference in the life of an individual. I am truely inspired. Well-done Sarah! May God continue to ignite His fire in your life.

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  48. Soul Lifting!
    I in Him, He in me...
    Nice piece, Great work Sarah!

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  49. Wow! God bless you really great for this soul lifting piece.

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  50. God is wonderful. This is a beautiful piece. Heavenly.

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  51. Great , and soul inspired...
    As a music expert, you have my YES

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  52. An inheritance that won’t decay. Well done!
    Good job

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  53. Wow, this is soul inspiring. Well done.

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  54. This is so beautiful, keep it up sarah

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  55. This is really inspiring. Thank you so much!

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  56. This is really nice. Awesome Job Sarah

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  57. May your cup be filled. Inspiring content.

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