Adenuga Sarah Oluwafeyisayo
The New Man Writing Contest
Theme: Partakers of His Grace (2 Peter 1:4; John 14:20)
Poem Title: The Change that happens when the Spirit comes
The Change that happens when the spirit comes
Intro
It starts like a whisper…
A breeze stirring dry ground,
A flicker where darkness had settled down.
Not just a moment, not just a spark,
But a fire igniting deep in the heart.
Verse 1
See, when the Spirit comes, everything shifts,
The weight of the past starts to lift.
Fear that held tight loses its grip,
Chains that once bound suddenly slip.
Eyes once closed now blaze with sight,
A soul once lost now walks in light.
No longer broken, no longer the same,
A heart reborn in Jesus’ name.
Chorus
Oh, the change when the Spirit moves,
When heaven’s power breaks through the roof!
No longer striving, no more shame,
Only grace—only His name.
Verse 2
I in Him, He in me,
A mystery wrapped in eternity.
Not just near but deep inside,
The very breath that turns the tide.
An inheritance that won’t decay,
Not bought by works, not swept away.
Unshakable, held in grace,
A promise secured beyond time and space.
Bridge
So when He moves, let walls collapse,
Let doubt give way, let faith unwrap.
No more fear, no more delay,
When the Spirit comes, the night turns day.
Outro
So I stand, no longer alone,
The Spirit in me, heaven’s throne.
A change so deep, a love so wide,
When He moves—I'm alive inside!
The Spirit indeed changes a man.
ReplyDeleteGreat write-up Sarah
Beautiful write-up, Sarah.
ReplyDeleteWhen the Spirit comes, everything changes!
Awesome. Splendid. This is a master piece. Keep it up Feyisayo.
ReplyDeleteI in Him, He in me,
ReplyDeleteA mystery wrapped in eternity.
Nice one Sarah!
I love her write up especially in verse 2
ReplyDeleteSuperb Sarah.
ReplyDeleteWhen the Spirit comes indeed everything changes. Keep up the good work.
"See, when the Spirit comes, everything shifts,
ReplyDeleteThe weight of the past starts to lift."
This Is really nice, Great Job Sarah
It's truly amazing, the truth you've been able to capture in these words, from the intro it already pulls me in.
ReplyDeleteI already have a favourite line "Not just a moment, not just a spark,
But a fire igniting deep in the heart."
This is an amazing Piece Sarah, well done
Waoh! Amazing piece, my dear! Burdens are indeed lifted when the spirit comes. The presence of the spirit is the starting point for change and transformation!
ReplyDeleteGo Feyi💪! The spirit has truly come on you❤️
When he moves, I'm alive inside.. you just created a masterpiece 😭😭😭🥺
ReplyDeleteGreat piece
ReplyDeleteGood work!
This is really beautiful
ReplyDeleteEvery line intentionally crafted to show how much we change when God's spirit is in us
Fantastic sarah
ReplyDeleteWhen he moves I am alive inside
Really amazing
ReplyDeleteKeep it up dear
"Eyes once closed now blaze with sight"
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the scripture .... the eyes of your understanding be enlightened.
Good job Sarah 👏
Awesome Sarah
ReplyDeleteThis is very good 👍 Keep it up
When Spirit comes you become unstoppable. Your choice of words are awesome. Well done dear
ReplyDeleteNothing meaningful can be achieved until the Spirit comes.
ReplyDeleteGreat.. as a music expert, you have my YES
DeleteKeep it up
ReplyDeleteWe're proud of you
Good job you dear, The Lord is your Strength By His Grace.
ReplyDeleteVery nice
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
Welldone Sarah. Good write up. You're blessed.
ReplyDelete"Only grace - only His name" - a summary of God gifting us His Spirit that leads to our renewal.
ReplyDeleteInspiring work, Sarah. Keep it up
Great work
ReplyDeleteKeep it up
Hmmmm
ReplyDeleteGreat Write up
A beautiful masterpiece!🔥
ReplyDeleteGreat job Sarah.
Yes, it is An inheritance that won’t decay,
ReplyDeleteNot bought by works, not swept away.
Unshakable, held in grace.
A beautiful write up Sarah.
Nice 👍, very interesting 👌🤯😎.
ReplyDeleteWonderful 😊👏
ReplyDeleteGood job Sarah. Beautiful write up
ReplyDeleteThis is very sound.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Sarah.
This is an interesting read
ReplyDeleteStrength frm the most high
ReplyDeleteAnd the Spirit shall rest upon you propelling you to higher heights
ReplyDeleteNot bought by works, not swept away. This was a really good read, well done!
ReplyDeletevery good write up Sarah. keep it up!
ReplyDeleteNice one Sarah. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteQuite impressive! Well done!👏🏾 👏🏾
ReplyDeleteThe spirit brings about lifting weight and causing every chains to loose, we are proud of the grace that brought us into new spirit... So inspiring Sarah 👍👍
ReplyDeleteSo edifying.
ReplyDeleteGood job Sarah.
Well done Sarah!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up🤗
Go,Feyi! It's a job well done.
ReplyDeleteOf a truth, the Spirit cause the different in the life of man and on earth as Jesus said the comforter will come as he ascend. It is evident up till today. Weldone Sarah, you have expressed your experience with the Spirit.
ReplyDeleteThe Spirit of God is a great gift to the believer.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up, the Lord is your strength
ReplyDeleteI in him, Him in me
ReplyDeleteIndeed a mystery!
Keep it up!
The Spirit is indeed a game changer
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece and it's so inspiring
ReplyDeleteIndeed I am alive when the spirit comes
Thank you so much
Please keep it up
Nice one Sarah, when the Spirit comes it's like a fire igniting the heart.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! God will continue to increase your wisdom in Jesus name
ReplyDeleteWell thought out piece. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhen the Spirit comes, a new man is born. Well done Sarah. More Grace.
ReplyDeleteThis is fantastic. Absolute truth. The lord is your strength
ReplyDeleteThe spirit of God makes a difference in the life of an individual. I am truely inspired. Well-done Sarah! May God continue to ignite His fire in your life.
ReplyDeleteSoul Lifting!
ReplyDeleteI in Him, He in me...
Nice piece, Great work Sarah!
Wow! God bless you really great for this soul lifting piece.
ReplyDeleteGod is wonderful. This is a beautiful piece. Heavenly.
ReplyDeleteGreat , and soul inspired...
ReplyDeleteAs a music expert, you have my YES
Beautiful and melodious
ReplyDeleteAn inheritance that won’t decay. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGood job
Wow, this is soul inspiring. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNice piece! Well done 👏
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful, keep it up sarah
ReplyDeleteThis is really inspiring. Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice. Awesome Job Sarah
ReplyDeleteMay your cup be filled. Inspiring content.
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