The Bill by Azeez Faith Tobiloba

New Man Gospel Writing Contest 2025 Shortlisted Entries - The New Man Movement

 

 

THE BILL

Long lost in thick darkness,
With no light in sight,
The verdict was death—
And yes, she deserved it.

She was a daughter of a traitor
Who, in ignorance, sold his dominion
To the cunniest of thieves—
the man called the stealer.

She was born into bondage,
With no voice, no choice,
Trapped in fleeting pleasure
That left only sighs in their wake.
A prisoner by inheritance,
Bound in chains till the set time.

Then, in the fullness of time,
a rescuer surfaced
Offering her hand in marriage.
The contract? Come with nothing.
Not her father's money, nor his ruins,
Only herself—her mouth and her heart.
For the price, he already paid.

With her mouth, she must confess:
"I am yours."
With her heart, she must believe.
He bought her freedom with blood, so precious,
Crowned with authority, she reigns at his side,
Indeed, a partaker of grace she never deserved.


Written By : Faith Azeez (Ajscribe)
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  1. Great piece🔥

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  2. Great piece🔥🔥

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  3. Great piece.✨

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  4. The language used is so apt.

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  5. So cool

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  6. This is awesome, indeed we are partakers of his benevolence - bill fully paid.

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  7. Goodness Fatolu15 March 2025 at 06:26

    The bill was paid with blood ? Indeed it has to be Grace. Beautiful piece

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  8. Olaore Adedayo Ishola15 March 2025 at 08:48

    I am completely awashed by this poem!
    It's classic! 👍

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  9. Wonderful Piece!

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  10. Chile Simeon Tersoo15 March 2025 at 09:27

    Wonderful Piece.

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  11. Oluwafemi Ojurongbe15 March 2025 at 09:37

    This is a great piece! Weldone!

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  12. Excellent rendering of thoughts.

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  13. The Bill, an awesome poet weaving powerful words that inspire and uplift. Great work!!!

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  14. Adekunle Adepelumi Samuel15 March 2025 at 10:48

    Hmmn,The redemption work of Christ
    This is good thinking put into good words,well done

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  15. Wonderful story of love - Salvation tale... Hallelujah!!! Great piece.

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  16. Celine Uduaghan15 March 2025 at 21:19

    This is a great piece! Well done

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  17. Aregbesola Micheal16 March 2025 at 10:27

    A wonderful piece.
    A perfect picture of our common salvation

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  18. So much work in-depth on the work of salvation

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  19. It's not only a great piece, this also shows God's love and reconciliation

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  20. Captivating and impressive. How do I get a hard copy of this

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  21. Wawoooo, this is capturing, awesome and great.
    Very wonderful keep it up dear
    More strength

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  22. Nice work. More unction, Scribe

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  23. I love the way the poem kept me on my toes until I read last paragraph, where it all came together.

    She kept the light at the end of the tunnel while still making the journey an experience...

    This was brilliant!!!

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